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Digest - 23 Mar 2010 to 29 Mar 2010 (#2010-59)

Mon, 29 Mar 2010

There are 2 messages totalling 64 lines in this issue.

Topics of the day:

  1. Episode Discussion: Jane Doe
  2. Beta Request

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Date:    Mon, 29 Mar 2010 03:48:05 -0700
From:    Walt Doherty <wdoherty5@c.......>
Subject: Re: Episode Discussion: Jane Doe

----- Original Message -----
From: "Phillips, Tim" <Tim.Phillips@s.......>

> 1) I like that they gave Tracy the "humanizing" trait that she is squimish
> around the worst of the dead bodies she encounters in her workday.  I also
> like that Reese had her try to face that down by working with Natalie.

    It's interesting but I found it to be sort of out of sequence.  Wouldn't
it have make more sense for a story like this, for Tracy, to have occurred
much earlier in the season?  She's got to have been around dead bodies for a
while by the time this story comes around.  It seems to me that this would
have been more appropriate in the first third of the stories.

    When there's a black out for a commercial break, when things start up
again, half the acts start out with Natalie and Tracy in the morgue.  It's
nice to see the Tracy/Natalie relationship be given some time and
development.  Maybe they could have become real friends if there had been a
fourth season.

> 7) A Coroner's office keeps oxygen bottles around?  Who are they expecting
> to recucitate?  I figure by the time Natalie gets 'em....they are WAYYYY
> beyond a little oxygen being helpful.
> Ah, well...when the writers need it, Natalie is as properly equipped as
> any OR.

    Actually, it's kinda cute and funny.  :-)  The oxygen is actually for
the 'seasoned veterans' and visitors who come to the morgue and see a bit
more than they want to.


Walt Doherty
wdoherty5@c.......
Phoenix, AZ

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Date:    Mon, 29 Mar 2010 03:56:49 -0700
From:    Walt Doherty <wdoherty5@c.......>
Subject: Beta Request

Hi, folk,

I have three short stories I could use some help with getting beta-read.
One is about 1200 words, another 1400, and the other 2500.
Please contact me off-list if you would be interested.

Thanks muchly,

Walt Doherty
wdoherty5@c.......
Phoenix, AZ

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